IP30 – April 23: Proofreading Causes Hunger Pangs




If you are not done marking errors on the back of recipes, you may want to check out the list of common errors in the earlier post. Also, thank you for your feedback on the first session. There were both positive comments and some not so enthusiastic. I think it is safe to say that if you can find value in a task, the task will be more rewarding. In the future, I will ask the following questions of students before the task, but this time, I will ask them… now. Please type up your response in Word, and email a copy to me.

 Title: Recipe Proofreading Activity

-What skills are needed for proofreading?
-What skills do you have that are useful for proofreading?
-What skills did you use while proofreading?
-What did you find the most difficult?
-What is something you learned from the activity?
-What stage of the information cycle is represented by this activity?

If you are done going through your portion of the recipes and making notes on the back, finish up the proofing task by making the corrections clearly on the actual recipe. White-out will be provided as available. If you have time, you can receive extra credit by checking over additional recipes, especially if you find any errors missed by 2 other proofers.

Final question, to post as a comment: Out of the recipes you proofed, which one would you most like to try, if the opportunity arose?

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11 Responses to “IP30 – April 23: Proofreading Causes Hunger Pangs”

  1. If i could eat one of the foods in the recipes, it would be Chicken Angelo. It is one of my recipes and is the best chicken recipe ever.

  2. I don’t know what recipe i’d want to make. There are soo many to choose from! It’s like going into Pine and Fancy and haveing to pick out your most favourite candy… it’s impossible!

  3. i dont know what recipe i would like to try, i guess i dont really care. i basically eat anything and i like to try new things so i guess all of them would be good!

  4. If I were to make one recipe I read, I’d make drumstick cake. It’s amazing. Except I wouldn’t make it, I’d get someone else to ….then I’d eat it.

  5. i dont know what one i would like to try because all of them sounded good but yeah i dont have one that i like the most… im not scared to try new things..

  6. There is so many recipe’s to choose from but my favoirte food is pasta so i would have to go with creamy chicken and mushroom Fettuccine.

  7. I would definitely like to try Joel’s Chicken Angelo because he always raves about it and says it is so good. as soon as i get my cook book i am going to make Jordan cook it for me (i suck at cooking)

  8. mmmm chicken

  9. So even though i’ve ate this many times i would definitly eat it ANYTIME! Jordan’s Famous Brownies are absolutely amazing and everyone should try them!

  10. Id like to try the mahagany wings, unbaked cherry cheesecake and the paradise wa ttoo slush. They all sound good. I cant wait until the cook book comes out!

  11. i would have to go with Joels Chicken Angelo, i have never tryed it but it sounds good.

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